Things to consider

I believe that I can add more details to my place. I have a vague description on what is located at my place but it isn’t descriptive to the point where you would be able to visualize every part of my place in text. I establish myself as the credible or an authority worth listening to because I will be talking about real life events that occurred at my place. I attended there when I was younger and had the opportunity to also work there as an adult. The information I summarize and explain will be true. I will describe my place differently from others by incorporating how the characters had an effect on me and the tasks I had to in each location. Each task that I completed, had an effect on me until this day. I will be descriptive and also compare how each location at my place looked when I was younger and how it will look now currently at my age. I attended audience are high schoolers, or children that are going to college. I went to be able to tie in, important values from each experience. I assume my readers my moral values which they know what is right and wrong, and knowing never to give up on an obstacle that they are trying to achieve. I am tapping into it in my story by having the story align with the meaning of each experience.

Character

Full Name: Jonathan Balthazar

Gender: Male

Age and Date of Birth (as your story does not need to have a contemporary

setting): 07-22-1998 (6 years old)

Birth City: Port Au Prince, Haiti

Parent’s Names: Jocelyn Balthazar

Siblings: Daione, Kayla

Ethnicity: Haitian

Pets: None

Education: Elementary

Favorite Movie:

Favorite TV Show:Scooby Doo

Favorite Book:

Favorite Food:Chicken

Favorite Day of the Week: Friday

Favorite Hobby:Football

Favorite Drink: Sprite

Favorite Band:

Favorite Song:

Favorite Halloween Costume (if s/he celebrated Halloween):

Religious affiliation: Christian

Political affiliation:

Love interest(s):

Physical Description

Eye Color:Brown

Hair Color and Style:short

Height:80 lbs

Weight:4’7

Skin Tone: brown

Facial Description (does s/he have a unique nose, forehead, eyes, ears, lips,

ect.?): he had big ears

Clothes (what s/he is wearing or usually wears):

Other Physical Characteristics (booty, busty, muscular, corpulent, scrawny,

disproportioned, ect.):scrawny and short

Defining Moments

The one childhood instance—good or bad—that indelibly affects who this

character is now:

The character’s proudest moment: Winning a soccer game

The character’s most embarrassing moment:

The character’s career goals of future aspirations/ambitions:To become a doctor

Whom the character would most like to have dinner with (past or present)

and why:

Three adjectives the character would use to describe him/herself: Coolest, fastest, and ambitious.