Place and Time Workshop

I read Sondra's paper and it was a short story. Overall, it was a great read, she minor mistakes and was on the right track. I loved how descriptive she was in her paper and would love to incorporate specific details within my paper. I need stress descriptiveness in my paper.

Another paper, I also read was my peer Julian. His paper was good but I felt like it focused too much on the building and not multiple time within the building. It explained one time but the transition to the other times, were a bit a confusing. I loved hoe he used other people's point of views and will consider implementing those aspects in my paper.